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Journal Entry: Wed Sep 30, 2009, 3:35 PM
So yeah, life's been nice with me for a change and landed me a really awesome boyfriend =) Here's a little something I've been working on lately:

You take me places I've never been,
where nothing makes sense.
In a nonsense land, is there a nonsense plan?
If you take me higher, I'll see beyond the clouds,
because nothing makes sense but reaching out to touch the sky.

Bring me home a rainy cloud, for the days I'm down,
A grey for the days I frown,
and a white, misty one for days with uncertanity.
Instead you bring me blue skies and a happy smile.

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*Judin Oct 5, 2009, 12:43:47 AM
I wished for an endrhyme in the last line, but overall you've made a beautiful poem. :)

Congratulations with the boyfriend! :D

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:blackrose:Welcome, Sir, please come right this way. My apologies for the screams. Oh, silly me, I forgot! Shall I hang up your straightjacket?:blackrose:
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~Silenced-beauty Oct 5, 2009, 1:02:17 AM
Thank you =) And like I said, it's something I've been working on, so it's not complete yet, or it would've been a deviation instead =P

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